homework
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HOMEWORK:
Writing Exercise: If war broke out in your country would you rather flee the country or fight? Answer in not more than 5 sentences.^-^
If there is a war in South Korea, I will die.
It is because it would be easier to die than to live.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]! ^^,)
Thank you for answering your homework.
However, dying isn\'t in the option. It\'s either to fight or to flee.
You\'d be too young to die. ^.~
I will talk to you again tomorrow.
Have a good night!
_Teacher Mayleen :)
If there is a war in South Korea, I will die.
>>> If war broke out in Korea, I would rather die.
It is because it would be easier to die than to live.
>>> Correct!
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