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2017-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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1. Richard is fixing his biclycle. 2. She's washing the dishes. 3. How do you spell that? 4. My husband is Mr. [Name] 5. Hello, Steve! This is [Name] I have writed weekly planner sinse last year. I wrired montly planner Before useing it. The weekly planner has many adventage. first,it's line is made according to time. So we can plan our schedule detaily by time. Second, we can know our daily patton and change our routine effectively. third, we don't need extra monthly planner. I recomend this planner that I meet people. I want to let them know more convinent method to plan our life.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Wow! Thank you for this sharing.

I don\'t really have a weekly planner.

You just gave me an idea on how to manage my time better. ^^

I agree with you that a planner has a lot of advantages.

Have a good night my dear. ^^


_Teacher Dianne ^_^


1. Richard is fixing his biclycle.

>> correct

>> Richard is fixing his bicycle.
 2. She\'s washing the dishes.

>> correct
 3. How do you spell that?

>> correct
 4. My husband is Mr. [Name]

>> correct
 5. Hello, Steve! This is [Name].

>> correct

 I have writed weekly planner sinse last year.

>>  I stated writing a weekly planner since last year.  

I wrired montly planner Before useing it.

>> I wrote my monthly plans before using it.

The weekly planner has many adventage.

>> The weekly planner has many advantages.  

first,it\'s line is made according to time. So we can plan our schedule detaily by time.

>> First, its line is made according to time, so we can plan our schedule on a daily basis.
 Second, we can know our daily patton and change our routine effectively.

>> Second, we can know our daily pattern and change our routine effectively.
 third, we don\'t need extra monthly planner.

>> Third, we don\'t need an extra monthly planner.

I recomend this planner that I meet people.
>>
I want to recommend this planner to every people I meet.

I want to let them know more convinent method to plan our life.

>> I want to let them know that this is a more convenient method to plan our life.

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