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Hi, [이름]!
Wow! Thank you for this sharing.
I don\'t really have a weekly planner.
You just gave me an idea on how to manage my time better. ^^
I agree with you that a planner has a lot of advantages.
Have a good night my dear. ^^
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
1. Richard is fixing his biclycle.
>> correct
>> Richard is fixing his bicycle.
2. She\'s washing the dishes.
>> correct
3. How do you spell that?
>> correct
4. My husband is Mr. [Name]
>> correct
5. Hello, Steve! This is [Name].
>> correct
I have writed weekly planner sinse last year.
>> I stated writing a weekly planner since last year.
I wrired montly planner Before useing it.
>> I wrote my monthly plans before using it.
The weekly planner has many adventage.
>> The weekly planner has many advantages.
first,it\'s line is made according to time. So we can plan our schedule detaily by time.
>> First, its line is made according to time, so we can plan our schedule on a daily basis.
Second, we can know our daily patton and change our routine effectively.
>> Second, we can know our daily pattern and change our routine effectively.
third, we don\'t need extra monthly planner.
>> Third, we don\'t need an extra monthly planner.
I recomend this planner that I meet people.
>> I want to recommend this planner to every people I meet.
I want to let them know more convinent method to plan our life.
>> I want to let them know that this is a more convenient method to plan our life.
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