homework
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강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
That was an interesting ad. There are a lot of creative advertisements nowadays that can teach us valuable information.
Anyway, enjoy your weekend!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
The most shocking ad I saw was a advertisement saying that books have tree ring of knowledge.
>>> The most shocking ad I saw was an advertisement saying that books have a ring of knowledge just like trees.
When you cut a tree, you can see a tree ring that can count the age of trees.
>>> When you cut a tree, you can see rings that provide the age of the tree.
I guess the same thing happens to books.
>>> Correct!
When you read a book, you can actually see how he human knowledge developed through years.
>>> When you read a book, you can actually see how human knowledge developed through the years.
I think that advertisement was shocking to me because it was so brilliant and clear.
>>> Correct!
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