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2017-10-27 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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The most shocking ad I saw was a advertisement saying that books have tree ring of knowledge. When you cut a tree, you can see a tree ring that can count the age of trees. I guess the same thing happens to books. When you read a book, you can actually see how he human knowledge developed through years. I think that advertisement was shocking to me because it was so brilliant and clear.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

That was an interesting ad. There are a lot of creative advertisements nowadays that can teach us valuable information.

Anyway, enjoy your weekend!


~Teacher Shanee^^,

 

The most shocking ad I saw was a advertisement saying that books have tree ring of knowledge.

>>> The most shocking ad I saw was an advertisement saying that books have a ring of knowledge just like trees.

When you cut a tree, you can see a tree ring that can count the age of trees.

>>> When you cut a tree, you can see rings that provide the age of the tree.

I guess the same thing happens to books.

>>> Correct!

When you read a book, you can actually see how he human knowledge developed through years.

>>> When you read a book, you can actually see how human knowledge developed through the years.

I think that advertisement was shocking to me because it was so brilliant and clear.

>>> Correct!

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