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Hi there, [이름]!
Thanks for your composition today! I admire you for not giving up on the things that you like. Keep it up!^^

T. JanE ^^

I will never give up on eating the tasty foods.

>> I will never give up on eating tasty foods. 

Actually there are a lot of things what I never give up.

>> Actually, there are a lot of things that I don\'t want to give up on. 

It\'s my family and friends, trip, and smile.

>> They include my family, friends, traveling, and smiling. 

However, I want to say about the tasty foods now.

>> However, I want to focus on the tasty foods for now. 

Much people give up on eating the tasty foods because of their diet in Korea.

>> Many people in Korea give up on eating tasty foods because of their diet.

But I don\'t want to do that.

>> Correct

I will travel somewhere and eat tasty foods with my loved one!

>> Correct