homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, my dear [이름]!
It\'s nice to know that you have a kind mentor who you can look up to.
I think she also inspires you to be diligent because that\'s what you are showing in class.
I hope that you continue being diligent. ^^
Thank you for sharing about your mentor.
Great job with your homework!
Have a fantastic weekend!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
1. We drove toward the river for an hour but turned north before we reached it.
>> correct
2. The kids climbed onto the monkey bars.
>> correct
3. Joanna got into Fred\'s car.
>> correct
4. The baby spilled his cereal on the floor.
>> correct
5. We cried to the man on the ladder, \"Hang on!\"
>> correct
I met my mento who taught me last summer how to read books at a restaurant in Jong-ro.
>> I met my mentor who taught me last summer how to read books at a restaurant in Jong-ro.
She has two jobs they are office worker and a teacher.
>> She has two jobs. She is an office worker and a teacher at the same time.
I learned method of reading books from her last summer.
>> I learned a method of reading books from her last summer.
>> or: I learned some methods of reading books from her last summer.
She was good teacher not only beautiful but also deligent.
>> She was a good teacher. She\'s not only beautiful, but diligent as well.
We had great lunch and talked about our goals of life, vision and health.
>> We had a great lunch and talked about our goals in life, vision, and health.
I got married and congratulated it. I paid for lunch price instead of wedding present.
>> I congratulated her for getting married. I paid for our lunch instead of giving her a wedding present.
She is nine years younger than me. But I respect her .She is warm, kind sometime I feel her like much more older.
>> She is nine years younger than me and I respect her .She is warm, kind, and sometimes I feel that she is much older than me.
I want to have the energy having self respect.
>> I want to have the energy or have self respect.
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