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2017-10-27 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

1. We drove toward the river for an hour but turned north before we reached it. 2. The kids climbed onto the monkey bars. 3. Joanna got into Fred's car. 4. The baby spilled his cereal on the floor. 5. We cried to the man on the ladder, "Hang on!" I met my mento who taught me last summer how to read books at a restaurant in Jong-ro. She has two jobs they are office worker and a teacher. I learned method of reading books from her last summer. She was good teacher not only beautiful but also deligent. We had great lunch and talked about our goals of life, vision and health. I got married and congratulated it. I paid for lunch price instead of wedding present. She is nine years younger than me. But I respect her .She is warm, kind sometime I feel her like much more older. I want to have the energy having self respect.

강사 첨삭

Hi, my dear [이름]!


It\'s nice to know that you have a kind mentor who you can look up to.

I think she also inspires you to be diligent because that\'s what you are showing in class.

I hope that you continue being diligent. ^^

Thank you for sharing about your mentor.

Great job with your homework!

Have a fantastic weekend!


_Teacher Dianne ^^



1. We drove toward the river for an hour but turned north before we reached it.

>> correct
 2. The kids climbed onto the monkey bars.

>> correct
3. Joanna got into Fred\'s car.

>> correct
 4. The baby spilled his cereal on the floor.

>> correct
 5. We cried to the man on the ladder, \"Hang on!\"

>> correct

 I met my mento who taught me last summer how to read books at a restaurant in Jong-ro.

>>  I met my mentor who taught me last summer how to read books at a restaurant in Jong-ro.
 She has two jobs they are office worker and a teacher.

>>  She has two jobs. She is an office worker and a teacher at the same time.
 I learned method of reading books from her last summer.

>>  I learned a method of reading books from her last summer.

>> or:  I learned some methods of reading books from her last summer.

She was good teacher not only beautiful but also deligent.

>> She was a good teacher. She\'s not only beautiful, but diligent as well.

We had great lunch and talked about our goals of life, vision and health.

>> We had a great lunch and talked about our goals in life, vision, and health.

I got married and congratulated it. I paid for lunch price instead of wedding present.

>> I congratulated her for getting married. I paid for our lunch instead of giving her a wedding present.
 She is nine years younger than me. But I respect her .She is warm, kind sometime I feel her like much more older.

>> She is nine years younger than me and I respect her .She is warm, kind, and sometimes I feel that she is much older than me.

I want to have the energy having self respect.

>> I want to have the energy or have self respect.



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