homework.

Hi there, Ella!

Thanks for your composition! You really love your freedom. I do, too.^^ This was well-written. Keep it up!

T. JanE ^^

What will you never give up on?
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It is very important that I keep holding on my freedom, liberty.

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Nobody asks me to change my faith and to work even i don\'t want to do.

>> Nobody asks me to change my faith and to work on something I don\'t want.

i\'ve seen some people who demand to me for them what i don\'t want.

>> I\'ve met people who demanded me to do something I don\'t want.

it was what intrude my right.

>> That is an invasion of my privacy.

Asking of change only for them not for me is rude if their asking makes me feel unreasonable and nonsense.

>> Asking me to change for them is rude especially when it makes me think it\'s un reasonable and nonsense.

it is valuable to keep taking my right of the liberty.

>> It is valuable for me to keep my right to liberty.

Losing freedom is as same as losing myself.

>> Losing freedom is the same as losing myself.

So i\'ll never give up on my right of the liberty for myself.

>> So I\'ll never give up on my right to liberty.