homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ella!
Thanks for your composition today! Thanks for the lovely pictures as well! The puppy looks so adorable!
T. JanE ^^
Karin and Leslie need to buy food, so they go to the supermarket.
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The name of their supermarket is Safeway. Before they go into the store, Karin gets a shopping cart.
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They walk up and down the aisles.
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They\'re hungry, so they choose a lot of different food: soba noodles, pasta, chocolate, nuts, crackers, tomatoes. Karin also buys some cat food for Kitty. Luckily, cat food is on sale, so it\'s cheaper than usual.
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Finally, Karin and Leslie get in line at the check-out counter.
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They are buying a lot of things, so they can\'t use the express lane.
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After the cashier gives them their change, they take their groceries to the car and go home. Now it\'s time to eat!
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