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Hi [이름]!^^
Thank you sharing your stories. I enjoyed reading your composition.^^
Have a good day and enjoy your stay in Australia.
~Kelly^^
Are you a risk taker? Why/why not? Explain your answer in FIVE (5) sentences.
No i`m not i`m kind of the stay at home type but i like traveling around world .
>> No, I\'m not. I\'m a stay-at-home type of person, but I like traveling around the world.
Some people challenge taking risk something dangerous things like traveling to the Middle East or Africa and climbing Mt. Everest also like the Sahara Race .
>> Some people are risk takers and they like engaging in dangerous activities traveling to the Middle East or Africa, climbing Mt. Everest or joining the Sahara Race.
My friend who was in the same high school has been to the Sahara desert
>> My high school classmate has been to the Sahara desert.
He said \" i was waking in the middle of Sahara i thought i might die at that time
>> He said, \"when I was walking in the middle of the Sahara desert, I thought I was going to die.\"
A water bottle i brought is almost done and there weren`t people around me \"
>> I almost consumed the bottle of water I brought and there weren\'t people around me at that time.
He still like taking risk and he is living in Canada as traveling now
>> He still likes taking risks and he is traveling in Canada now.
As for me , The biggest taking risk is to come in Australia ! That`s all
>> As for me, the biggest risk I have made was coming here in Australia. That\'s all!
This is a miracle for me working with people from other countries !
>> Working with other people from other countries is a miracle for me.
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