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2017-11-01 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

What do you remember about me? ==> Time flows very fast. I met you first time 9 months ago and we always meet together in the early morning. When I met you first time, I was novice in speaking English but nowadays my English speaking ability is improving rapidly(?) because of your effort for me. You are very energetic and active in our class. You always check my speaking mistakes with deliberation so I am very happy when I read your feedback. I think you are very patient because I do same mistakes repeatedly, but you Your fashion for teaching English make me studying. Because of that you are great teacher for me. Anyway, I hope that you spend happy Halloween!

강사 첨삭

You are full of surprises!

Your sharp memory surprised me! Thanks for remembering how long we\'re friends now.

I hope that you\'d see more improvements in your English communication skills.

Review the feedback when you got time and like what you\'re doing right now, write and write.

Thanks for all the good vibes!

Until our next chat!

-Klein-

What do you remember about me? 
==>
 Time flows very fast.
>>Correct 

I met you first time 9 months ago and we always meet together in the early morning.

>>I met you for the first time nine months ago and we always meet early in the morning.
 When I met you first time, I was novice in speaking English but nowadays my English speaking ability is improving rapidly(?) because of your effort for me.
 
>>When I first met you, I was a novice in speaking English but nowadays my English speaking ability may be improving rapidly because of your effort.

You are very energetic and active in our class.
 
>>Correct

You always check my speaking mistakes with deliberation so I am very happy when I read your feedback.
 
>>Correct

I think you are very patient because I do same mistakes repeatedly, but you Your fashion for teaching English make me studying.
>>I think you are very patient, because I do the same mistakes repeatedly, but your passion for teaching English is making me to study.

Because of that you are great teacher for me.
>>Because of that, you are a great teacher for me.
Anyway, I hope that you spend happy Halloween!

>>Anyway, I hope that you spend a happy Halloween!

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