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Two places where I have visited so far must really be wonders which I want to recommend you to visit once.
One has been carved by God and the other had been built by human beings.
The Grand Canyon that abruptly appeared below my feet made me speechless with surprise for a few minutes and quietly sigh "wow!"
I thought it must have been being built by God, not nature.
The Grand Canyon is a steep-sided canyon carved by the Colorado River in Arizona.
It is 446 kilometers long, 29 kilometers wide and 1.6 kilometers deep.
The Colorado River was just like a beautiful silver string.
The Grand Canyon is one of the most impressive places I have seen along with the Brice Canyon and the Giant Canyon.
The Great Wall of China is a UNESCO World Heritage Site.
I visited one of well-preserved parts of the Great Wall located near Beijing 7 years ago.
When I first saw it, it was never comparable with any ancient fortifications in Korea due to its huge size and sophistication.
The Great Wall made of the numerous rectangle-shaped stones was endlessly being spread following mountains' ridge line.
The majestic scenery made me groan, with mobilized several generations' miserable lives overlapped with it.
강사 첨삭
HELLO MR. [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework.
Have a nice day ahead!
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
Two places where I have visited so far must really be wonders which I want to recommend you to visit once.
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One has been carved by God and the other had been built by human beings.
One has been carved by God and the other had been built by human beings.
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The Grand Canyon that abruptly appeared below my feet made me speechless with surprise for a few minutes and quietly sigh \"wow!\"
The Grand Canyon that abruptly appeared below my feet made me speechless with surprise for a few minutes and quietly sigh \"wow!\"
>> CORRECT
I thought it must have been being built by God, not nature.
I thought it must have been being built by God, not nature.
>> CORRECT
The Grand Canyon is a steep-sided canyon carved by the Colorado River in Arizona.
The Grand Canyon is a steep-sided canyon carved by the Colorado River in Arizona.
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It is 446 kilometers long, 29 kilometers wide and 1.6 kilometers deep.
It is 446 kilometers long, 29 kilometers wide and 1.6 kilometers deep.
>> CORRECT
The Colorado River was just like a beautiful silver string.
The Colorado River was just like a beautiful silver string.
>> CORRECT
The Grand Canyon is one of the most impressive places I have seen along with the Brice Canyon and the Giant Canyon.
The Grand Canyon is one of the most impressive places I have seen along with the Brice Canyon and the Giant Canyon.
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The Great Wall of China is a UNESCO World Heritage Site.
The Great Wall of China is a UNESCO World Heritage Site.
>> CORRECT
I visited one of well-preserved parts of the Great Wall located near Beijing 7 years ago.
I visited one of well-preserved parts of the Great Wall located near Beijing 7 years ago.
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When I first saw it, it was never comparable with any ancient fortifications in Korea due to its huge size and sophistication.
When I first saw it, it was never comparable with any ancient fortifications in Korea due to its huge size and sophistication.
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The Great Wall made of the numerous rectangle-shaped stones was endlessly being spread following mountains\' ridge line.
The Great Wall made of the numerous rectangle-shaped stones was endlessly being spread following mountains\' ridge line.
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The majestic scenery made me groan, with mobilized several generations\' miserable lives overlapped with it.
The majestic scenery made me groan, with mobilized several generations\' miserable lives overlapped with it.
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