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학생이 쓴 원문
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Hi, my dear [이름]!
I appreciate that you shared something you want to have in the future.
Well, I understand that you really like reading books. ^^
We learn a lot by reading, not only about new words or expressions, but we also learn about living life.
Thank you for sharing.
_Teacher Dianne ^^
** Creative Writing: If there is one thing you would really like to achieve in the future, what is it? Why?
>> correct
I have a dream that is operating a library in the future.
>> correct
>> or: I have a dream to operate or open a library in the future.
The library is not only reading books or studying.
>> The library is not only for reading books or studying.
Most important value of the library is learning something.
>> The most important value of the library is learning something.
There will have many cultural lectures for cityzen.
>> There will be a lot of cultural lectures for the citizens.
I want to help people who come to the library think creativity through books and many kinds of lectures.
>> I want to help the people who come to the library think creatively through books and many kinds of lectures.
Books give to people not olny knowledge but also time to think about something.
>> Books give people not only knowledge, but also time to think about something.
it\'s why I like picture book especially.
>> It\'s why I like the pictures from the book especially.
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