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2017-11-01 · 첨삭 강사 Kathy

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If you could learn to speak another language, which language would you like to learn? Why? If I can learn to another language, I want to learn Spanish. It was hope for long time. When I was 20's, I wanted to go South America, So, after I learn Spanish, I wanted to go there. I studied Spanish for a while. But I have not studied steadily and I do not remember anything now. And I have not been to South America.

강사 첨삭

Hello Julie,
Thank you for doing your homework.
~~ Teacher Kathy
If I can learn to another language, I want to learn Spanish.
>> If I can learn another language, I want to learn Spanish.
It was hope for long time.
>> It was my dream for a long time.
When I was 20\'s, I wanted to go South America,
>> When I turn 20, I plan to go to South America.
So, after I learn Spanish, I wanted to go there.
>> But I will go there after I learn the Spanish language.
I studied Spanish for a while.
>> I tried learning the language.
But I have not studied steadily and I do not remember anything now. And I have not been to South America.
>> But it was just for a short period of time and I was not able to fully concentrate. I could not remember anything now and I haven\'t been to South America yet.

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