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Hi there [이름]!

In my opinion, all sports can bring us harm if not played properly.

To play a sport safely, we must be aware of the rules.

Thanks for writing this. See you tomorrow!

~Teacher Shanee^^,

I think the most dangerous sport is basketball.

>>> Correct!

I read from an article that playing basketball sent the most people to emergency rooms.

>>> I read from an article that playing basketball sent a lot of people to emergency rooms.

Your injury might not be serious, but sometimes you might be out of luck and get hurt badly.

>>> Correct!

I understand that playing basketball can\'t be the cause of death, but who knows you\'ll accidently break and important bone and be in the wheelchair rest of your life.

>>> I understand that playing basketball can\'t be the cause of death, but there is a possibility that a player breaks an important bone that will put him / her on a wheelchair for the rest of his / her life.

I also think that surfing and gymnastic is dangerous.

>>> I also think that surfing and gymnastics are dangerous.

You never know what is in the sea.

>>> Correct!

There might be a rock that you didn\'t see and you can cut open your foot.

>>> You may overlook a rock that can cause you injury.

Also, you can be bitten by predators in the sea.

>>> Correct!

There isn\'t a high chance of that, but as I said, you never know.

>>> Correct!

I think gymnastic is dangerous too.

>>> I think gymnastics in dangerous too.

You do flops and flips.

>>> Correct!

You have to do a flip on a beam, and jump off from a bar.

>>> You have to do a flip on a beam and jump off from a bar. [remove comma]

I actually tried gymnastic when I was young, and I broke three bones and got two sprains over the three years of doing gymnastic.

>>> I actually tried gymnastics when I was

You might break you neck bone and die or have a major surgery.

>>> Correct!