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2017-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hey mate how`s it going??? Working with indonesian guys in the kicthen is very good and funny . they speak english instead of their own language caring for me . and i learned english expression from them like slang and ....i can`t write here cuz That`s kind of a erotic thing to say . And there`s a Canadian man in our shop . if i say to him one sentence , he spaeks ten sentence that can`t understand even one sentence To be honest , i can`t understand what he say . cuz he speaks english so fast I always tell him to speak english slowly but he don`t hahaha it`s okay it`s not big deal Is there a special gift you like to get? Of course there is a special gift i like to get that`s a watch called Tag heuer. the staring price for a watch at least is about $1000 i guess . if i earn a lot of money , i`ll get one and give my brother , my facher each one . to my mom i`ll give a Cartier`s necklace ! Somebody might give me the watch for a birthday or not maybe not

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!^^

Thank you for your stories again. I always enjoy reading your compositions. Anyway, the watch that you like is pricey, but I\'m sure it is really elegant.^^

Have a good day!

~Kelly^^

Hey mate how\'s it going???
>> Correct.
Working with indonesian guys in the kicthen is very good and funny .

>> Working with Indonesian guys in the kicthen is very good and fun.

they speak english instead of their own language caring for me . 

>> They speak English instead of their own language because of me. 

and i learned english expression from them like slang and ....

>> And, I learned an English slang expression from them.

i can`t write here cuz That`s kind of a erotic thing to say.  

>> I can\'t write it here because it\'s kind of erotic word.

And there`s a Canadian man in our shop . 

>> Correct.

To be honest , i can`t understand what he say . cuz he speaks english so fast

>> To be honest , I can`t understand what he says because he speaks English so fast.
I always tell him to speak english slowly but he don`t hahaha it`s okay it`s not big deal 

>> I always speak to him in English slowly, but he doesn\'t hahaha. It\'s okay, it\'s not a big deal. 
Is there a special gift you like to get?
Of course there is a special gift i like to get that`s a watch called Tag heuer. 

>> Of course, there is a special gift I like to get. It\'s a Tag Heuer watch. 

the staring price for a watch at least is about $1000 i guess . 

>> The starting price for that watch is about $1000, I guess . 

if i earn a lot of money , i`ll get one and give my brother , my facher each one .

>> If I earn a lot of money, I\'ll get one for myself and give my brother and my father as well.

to my mom i`ll give a Cartier`s necklace !

>> For my mom, I\'ll give her a Cartier\'s necklace!
Somebody might give me the watch for a birthday or not maybe not

>> Somebody may give me the watch as a birthday present or maybe not.

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