homework
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HOMEWORK: Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
Auto machine that I used is a dish washer.
Many house wifes may love it. It has many advantages.
We don't need to wash dishes every day. It can wash lots of dishes.
we can save the time useing this machine.
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Auto machine that I used is a dish washer.
Many house wifes may love it. It has many advantages.
We don\'t need to wash dishes every day. It can wash lots of dishes.
we can save the time useing this machine.
One of the machines that I use is the auto machine dish washer. It has many advantages, we don\'t need to wash dishes everyday, and it can also clean lots of dishes. I am certain that many house wives may love it. It can save our time and we may do other chores.
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