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2017-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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10/11 This is a How-to essay. Give a specific direction from the biggest supermarket to your house. My town doesn't have a big supermarket so I need to drive to the market. First, need to find the big road towards to Myoung sung church. There is a intersection. Check that church is on your leftside. You need to turn left at the intersection. Drive straightly for 10minutes then you will see E-mart.

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Thank you for giving me the specific direction.

I\'ll see you later!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


10/11 This is a How-to essay. Give a specific direction from the biggest supermarket to your house.


My town doesn\'t have a big supermarket so I need to drive to the market.

>>> Correct!
 First, need to find the big road towards to Myoung sung church.

>>> First, you need to find the big road towards Myoung Sung church.
 There is a intersection.

>>> There is an intersection.

Check that church is on your leftside.

>>> Check the church on your left side.

You need to turn left at the intersection.

>>> Then, turn left at the intersection.

Drive straightly for 10minutes then you will see E-mart.

>>> Drive safely for ten [10] minutes then you will see E-mart.  [spacing]

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