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2017-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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What are you nuts about right now? What do you do about it? ==> I am nuts about playing golf right now. My wife started playing golf last year and she is studying in the golf practice club. Her score is not good but she is interested in golf. She is trying to decrease her score with trainer's help. I have to play with her on weekends. I went the screen golf room with my wife on last Saturday, We played two games continuously. I sometimes go there with my wife and we enjoy playing golf. In my case, my golf score is also improving. Maybe I go screen golf room frequently because of my wife, it makes me practice automatically. Anyway, nowadays my wife and I are nuts about playing golf. I think it is very good exercise when I am older and older. So I also recommend playing golf with my friends. It is a good sport to spend time when I will be a old person.

강사 첨삭

There you have it! You finally said it, James. No wonder you\'re so happy talking about golf. You and your wife can\'t get enough of it. I\'m so glad you enjoy the same sport. You get to spend more time together happily!

That is truly inspiring! Thanks for sharing!

May you continue to have a wonderful time with your family and your friends.

Catch you later!

-Klein-

What are you nuts about right now?
What do you do about it?
 ==>
 I am nuts about playing golf right now.
 >>Correct

My wife started playing golf last year and she is studying in the golf practice club.

 >>Correct
 Her score is not good but she is interested in golf.
 
>>Correct

She is trying to decrease her score with trainer\'s help.
 
>>She is trying to decrease her score with a trainer\'s help.

I have to play with her on weekends.
 
>>Correct

I went the screen golf room with my wife on last Saturday,
 
>>I went to a screen golf room with my wife last Saturday.

We played two games continuously.
 
>>Correct

I sometimes go there with my wife and we enjoy playing golf.
 
>>Correct

In my case, my golf score is also improving.
 
>>Correct

Maybe I go screen golf room frequently because of my wife, it makes me practice automatically.
 
>>Correct

Anyway, nowadays my wife and I are nuts about playing golf.
 
>>Correct

I think it is very good exercise when I am older and older.
 
>>I think it is a very good exercise as I am getting older and older.

So I also recommend playing golf with my friends.
 
>>Correct

It is a good sport to spend time when I will be a old person.

>>It is a good sport to spend time for when I will be an old person.

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