homework.
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Hi there, Ella!
Thanks for your composition! You did a great job in answering your homework! Impressive! Keep it up!
T. JanE ^^
One thing everybody wants is being happy.
>> Correct
Happiness is in everywhere and near but people don\'t recognize it.
>> Happiness is everywhere, but people don\'t recognize it.
People think it is difficult to be happy but it\'s not true.
>> Correct
Even the happiness is not long time, that is also happiness and several small happinesses makes a long time happiness.
>> Some do not last for a long time, but being happy even for just a while when accumulated can make happiness that lasts for a long time.
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