HOMEWORK

2017-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

HI! Rose Happy tuesday. I will go to swimming class at after work. I will trainning diving in the pool. I was fear for diving at last class. But I can do it at today class. Have a nice day. HOMEWORK. What is the that irritates you? Today is IBDONG. This maen is started winter. Winter in korea is very cold. Cold weather irritate me. I catch a cold during winter. then I hardly get out.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for doing your homework, Miss [이름]^^

Be careful^^ Tell me about your diving tomorrow~

Moreover, take care during this season!

Don\'t catch a cold! Wear warm clothing!^^ See you!

HI! Rose

>>Hi, Rose!
 Happy tuesday. 

>>Happy Tuesday.
 I will go to swimming class at after work.

>>CORRECT!
 I will trainning diving in the pool.

>> I will train how to dive into the pool.
 I was fear for diving at last class. But I can do it at today class. 

>>I was afraid of doing it during the last class, but I can do it today.
 Have a nice day.
>>CORRECT!
HOMEWORK:
What is the that irritates you?
>>
What is the thing that irritates you?
Today is IBDONG.

>>CORRECT!
 This maen is started winter. 

>>It means that the winter has started.
 Winter in korea is very cold. 

>> Winter in Korea is very cold. 
 Cold weather irritate me.

>> Cold weather irritates me.
 I catch a cold during winter. then I hardly get out.

>>I catch a cold during winter and it is very hard to recover.

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