Homework
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강사 첨삭
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I think everyone needs to maintain privacy
>> I think everyone needs to maintain their privacy.
I lock password on my cellphone
>> I lock my cellphone with a password.
Because there are my telephone number of my friends, talking in Kakao and my photo
>> Because I save my friends contact numbers, Kakao talk information and photos in my cellphone.
I think it is the best way to keep my privacy
>> I think, it is the best way to keep my privacy.
Thanks
>> Correct.
Bye~~~
>> Correct.
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