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2017-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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10/16 ANTILLO, ITALY Vittoria Celemi and Sebastio Macaroni live in a small village in Sicily. They are in love. 0ne day, Sebastio gives Vittoria an engagement ring and asks her to marry him. Vittoria accepts, but she adds, "Let's wait to get married until we can afford the perfect wedding! We don't have enough money now." Vittoria begins to shop for a wedding dress, and she soon finds the perfect one. It's long, lacy, and beautiful. But it costs an arm and a leg! So Vittoria starts to save her money. She makes a small payment every year. She saves up for 40 years! At long last, after a 40-year wedding, Vittoria can buy the wedding dress. She and Sebastio decide to tie the knot. At the wedding, Vittoria looks beautiful in her dress. The newlyweds are in seventh heaven. They dance, drink champagne, and eat caviar. Afterward, they ride off in a horse-drawn carriage. Their friends watch them and think, "It's about time! " This story is so interesting!*^^* I like this homework. Thanks!!

강사 첨삭

It is indeed an interesting story Miss [이름]!

Can you imagine being engaged for 40 years before getting married? They should receive the loyalty award! Haha! Well, that\'s true love I guess.

See you tomorrow!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


10/16 ANTILLO, ITALY Vittoria Celemi and Sebastio Macaroni live in a small village in Sicily.

>>> Correct!

They are in love. 0ne day, Sebastio gives Vittoria an engagement ring and asks her to marry him.

>>> Correct!

Vittoria accepts, but she adds, \"Let\'s wait to get married until we can afford the perfect wedding!

>>> Correct!

 We don\'t have enough money now.\" Vittoria begins to shop for a wedding dress, and she soon finds the perfect one. It\'s long, lacy, and beautiful.

>>> Correct!

But it costs an arm and a leg!

>>> Correct!

So Vittoria starts to save her money. She makes a small payment every year.

>>> Correct!

She saves up for 40 years! At long last, after a 40-year wedding, Vittoria can buy the wedding dress.

>>> At long last, after a 40-year engagement, Vittoria can buy the wedding dress.

She and Sebastio decide to tie the knot. At the wedding, Vittoria looks beautiful in her dress. The newlyweds are in seventh heaven.

>>> Correct!

 They dance, drink champagne, and eat caviar.

>>> Correct!

Afterward, they ride off in a horse-drawn carriage. Their friends watch them and think, \"It\'s about time! \"
>>> Correct!
This story is so interesting!*^^*
I like this homework. Thanks!!

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