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2017-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

task: What personality traits do you consider important in a good friend? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences. My best friend is Sang Yun No, but my good friend is Kim Gi Ho. He live same line my house.HIs house is 4floor and my house is 8floor. His personality is nice. So,he is a populer to other friends. He offered to me foods,umbrella,pencil.And when I feel angry or sad he encouragement me. So,I want to nice for him,too.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

I am happy that your friends are also nice just like you. Enjoy your friends company and be nice to one another.^^

~t. Kelly^^

task: What personality traits do you consider important in a good friend? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences.
My best friend is Sang Yun No, but my good friend is Kim Gi Ho.

>> Correct.
He live same line my house.

>> We live in the same apartment building.

HIs house is 4floor and my house is 8floor.

>> His apartment unit is on the 4th floor and my apartment is on the 8th floor.
His personality is nice. S
o,he is a populer to other friends.

>> He has a nice personality, so he is popular to our other friends.
He offered to me foods,umbrella,pencil.

>> He shares his foods, mbrella and pencil to me.

And when I feel angry or sad he encouragement me.

>> And when I feel angry or sad, he encourages me.
So,I want to nice for him,too.

>> So, I want to be nice to him, too.

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