homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I am happy that your friends are also nice just like you. Enjoy your friends company and be nice to one another.^^
~t. Kelly^^
task: What personality traits do you consider important in a good friend? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences.
My best friend is Sang Yun No, but my good friend is Kim Gi Ho.
>> Correct.
He live same line my house.
>> We live in the same apartment building.
HIs house is 4floor and my house is 8floor.
>> His apartment unit is on the 4th floor and my apartment is on the 8th floor.
His personality is nice. So,he is a populer to other friends.
>> He has a nice personality, so he is popular to our other friends.
He offered to me foods,umbrella,pencil.
>> He shares his foods, mbrella and pencil to me.
And when I feel angry or sad he encouragement me.
>> And when I feel angry or sad, he encourages me.
So,I want to nice for him,too.
>> So, I want to be nice to him, too.
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