homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework.
I appreciate your answer. I was actually expecting you to mention a name of a celebrity but you didn\'t.
You would rather say that the most beautiful person is the person himself/herself who loves and make some effort for his/her dreams.
I can say you\'re beautiful! ^^
~~Teacher May~~
In my country, There are many people who have pretty face and body.
>> In my country, there are many people who have pretty faces and beautiful body.
I think, The most beautiful person is the person who love themselves.
>> I think that the most beautiful person is the person who loves himself/herself.
When she or he make an effort for something, It seems like beautiful.
>> If he or she makes an effort to achieve something, it will definitely make him or her beautiful.
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