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2017-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hello~ what`s up?? as the summer is coming , our shop changed some menus. When i went to there , the kicthen was mess . because of new menus so i said " what a mess! how`s the new menus mate?? and he was like " [이름] not too bad! you have to memorize all the new menus until today huh? ok lah? i believe you can memorize " It was easy to make and memorize it wasn`t big deal. now we have 3 more side dishes than before and i have more work to do lol! What personality traits do you consider important in a good friend? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences. i like having a friend who`s honest and not fake at all i have a friend who gives me a advice sometimes whatever i do , he say "before you do something think abiout yourself and judge something that you`re trying to do whether something deserve or not . if you have conviction that you want to do something , don`t stop and keep going . so i can say that is surround yourself with supprotive loved friends

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Hi [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your thoughts about friendship. You are lucky to have found a good friend.^^ Anyway, I hope your customers will enjoy your new menu.^^

~Kelly^^

Hello~ what`s up?? 

>> Correct.

as the summer is coming , our shop changed some menus. 

>> Since summer is coming, our shop changed some of its menus. 
When i went to there , the kicthen was mess . because of new menus so i said \" what a mess! 

>> On my first day of work, I discovered that their chicken tasted really bad. I said, \"what a mess\". So, I changed the menu.
how`s the new menus mate?? 

>> How\'s the new menu mate?

and he was like \" [이름] not too bad! 

>> And he said, \"[이름], it\'s not too bad\".

you have to memorize all the new menus until today huh? ok lah? i believe you can memorize \" 

>> I told him, \"You have to memorize all the new menus starting today, ok? I believe you can memorize them.\"
It was easy to make and memorize it wasn`t big deal. 

>> It was easy to make a menu and memorize it, It wasn\'t a big deal.

Now we have 3 more side dishes than before and i have more work to do lol!

>> Now, we added three more side dishes in our menu, so I have more work to do.
What personality traits do you consider important in a good friend? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences.
i like having a friend who`s honest and not fake at all 

>> I like having a friend who\'s honest and not fake at all.  
i have a friend who gives me a advice sometimes 

>> I have a friend who sometimes gives me an advice.

whatever i do , he say \"before you do something think abiout yourself and judge something that you`re trying to do whether something deserve or not . 

>> He said that before I do something, I have to think carefully whether my decision will be good for me or not.

if you have conviction that you want to do something , don`t stop and keep going .

>> If you have conviction to do something, don\'t stop and keep going.

so i can say that is surround yourself with supprotive loved friends

>> So, I think that we should surround ourselves with supportive and loving friends.

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