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I have been to party of my husband company two months ago
There were many people and a famous singer named Sistar
They came to perform and sang their song
I usually like their song altough not dance
It was fun
Thank you
Bye~~~~~~
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I have been to party of my husband company two months ago
>> I attended a party of my husband\'s company two months ago.
There were many people and a famous singer named Sistar
>> There were many people including the singer named \"Sistar\".
They came to perform and sang their song
>> She performed and sang her songs during the party.
I usually like their song altough not dance
>> I like her songs but not the way she dances.
It was fun
>> Correct.
Thank you
>> Correct.
Bye~~~~~~
>> Correct.
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