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That\'s because you were innocent that time Miss [이름].
I also had the same experience in elementary.
I used to believe that there\'s a white lady living in our Home Economics\' room so I was so afraid to go to that place. Hahaha!
Anyway, thanks for sharing that experience. See you later!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
10/17 Write a brief background history of your school.
Wow! Each school has a history.
>>> Correct!
Normarlly students like to talk to about
scary history.
>>> Normally, students like to talk about scary stories.
I graduated from schools long time ago so I don\'t really remmerber about history.
>>> I graduated from school a long time ago so I don\'t really remember our school\'s history.
I\'ve just remember one when I was in first grade in Elementary school.
>>> I can only remember a story when I was in first grade in elementary school.
I guess everyone knows about this but I was so innocent to trust this history.hehe
>>> I guess everyone knew that this story was unreal but I was so innocent that time and believed the story. hehe
There were some statues.
>>> Correct!
Among them, there was a statue which is a boy and a girl reading a book.
>>> Among them, there were statues of a boy and a girl reading a book.
Senior students told me that they cried with blood tears and read a book
in the midnight. hehe
>>> Senior students told me that they cry tears of blood and read a book in the midnight. hehe
After hearing that story, I was so scared.
>>> Correct!
I had a dream about it everynight.
>>> I had a dream about it every night.
It is so funny that I believed the story.^^
>>> Correct!
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