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2017-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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10/17 Write a brief background history of your school. Wow! Each school has a history. Normarlly students like to talk to about scary history. I graduated from schools long time ago so I don't really remmerber about history. I've just remember one when I was in first grade in Elementary school. I guess everyone knows about this but I was so innocent to trust this history.hehe There were some statues. Among them, there was a statue which is a boy and a girl reading a book. Senior students told me that they cried with blood tears and read a book in the midnight. hehe After hearing that story, I was so scared. I had a dream about it everynight. It is so funny that I believed the story.^^

강사 첨삭

That\'s because you were innocent that time Miss [이름].

I also had the same experience in elementary.

I used to believe that there\'s a white lady  living in our Home Economics\' room so I was so afraid to go to that place. Hahaha!

Anyway, thanks for sharing that experience. See you later!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


10/17 Write a brief background history of your school.
Wow! Each school has a history.

>>> Correct!

Normarlly students like to talk to about
scary history.

>>> Normally, students like to talk about scary stories.

I graduated from schools long time ago so I don\'t really remmerber about history.

>>> I graduated from school a long time ago so I don\'t really remember our school\'s history.

I\'ve just remember one when I was in first grade in Elementary school.

>>> I can only remember a story when I was in first grade in elementary school.

I guess everyone knows about this but I was so innocent to trust this history.hehe

>>> I guess everyone knew that this story was unreal but I was so innocent that time and believed the story. hehe

There were some statues.

>>> Correct!

Among them, there was a statue which is a boy and a girl reading a book. 

>>> Among them, there were statues of a boy and a girl reading a book.
 Senior students told me that they cried with blood tears and read a book
in the midnight. hehe

>>> Senior students told me that they cry tears of blood and read a book in the midnight. hehe

After hearing that story, I was so scared.

>>> Correct!

I had a dream about it everynight.

>>> I had a dream about it every night.

It is so funny that I believed the story.^^

>>> Correct!

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