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2017-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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10/19 Write an essay about the most creative thing you've made. I think I am not a creative person but I can copy something well. When I was in university, I had a child art class. I learned about art teaching skills but before that students should do the same things like a child. I needed to draw and make a craft but I am not good at doing this. So I made a craft at home. Actually it was hard to plan making a craft. I searched the net and did it. When my professor and classmates saw what I made. They were all surprised. hehe After that class, they teased me alot.hehe

강사 첨삭

I\'m wondering about what you drew that time.

Can you tell me about it later? See you!

~Teacher Shanee^^,

10/19 Write an essay about the most creative thing you\'ve made.

I think I am not a creative person but I can copy something well.

>>> Correct!
When I was in university, I had a child art class.

>>> Correct!

I learned about art teaching skills but before that students should do the same things like a child.

>>> Correct!

I needed to draw and make a craft but I am not good at doing this.

>>> Correct!
So I made a craft at home.

>>> Correct!

Actually it was hard to plan making a craft.

>>> Correct!
I searched the net and did it.

>>> Correct!

When my professor and classmates saw what I made.

>>> Correct!

They were all surprised. hehe

>>> Correct!

After that class, they teased me alot.hehe

>>> Correct!

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