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2017-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: FEAR is a vital response to physical and emotional danger. Why do we feel fear? Why do you think we have nightmares? I think we have to get little stress.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]! ^^,)


I guess you didn\'t really answer the question.

Fear is one of the most powerful emotions. It has a very strong effect on your mind and body.
Fear is a feeling induced by perceived danger or threat that occurs in certain types of organisms.
It can also take effect when you’re faced with non-dangerous events, like exams, public speaking, a new job, a date, or even a party. It’s a natural response to a threat that can be either perceived or real.


Have a good night!


_T. Mayleen :)


I think we have to get little stress.

>>> I think fear can make us feel stressed.

>>> OR: I think it happens because we\'re a little bit stressed.

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