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2017-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Gary and I have decided to become Pat Boone imitators. 2. The victims are them. 3. We actuaries are going to run away and join the World Wrestling Federation. 4. The cause is unquestionably her. 5. Madness takes it's toll. Please have exact change. 6. Her kisses left something to be desired -the rest of her. 7. Human beings, whom are almost unique in having the ability to learn from the experience of others, are also remarkable for their apparent disinclination to do so. 8. Sam and I heard that the Internal Revenue Service wants to improve its image; they will no longer answer the phone with 'Next victim,' and a new mascot, Timmy the Tax Collector, will replace the Grim Reaper. 9. The only difference between me and a madman is that I am not mad. 10. Those who make peaceful revolution impossible will make violent revolution inevitable

강사 첨삭

Pronouns are confusing, aren\'t they [이름]?

I made the necessary corrections below. Kindly go over them. See you tomorrow!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


1. Gary and I have decided to become Pat Boone imitators.

>>> Correct!
 2. The victims are them.

>>> The victims are they.
3. We actuaries are going to run away and join the World Wrestling Federation.

>>> Correct!
 4. The cause is unquestionably her.

>>> The cause is unquestionably she.
 5. Madness takes it\'s toll. Please have exact change.

>>> Madness takes its toll. Please have exact change.
 6. Her kisses left something to be desired -the rest of her.

>>> Correct!
 7. Human beings, whom are almost unique in having the ability to learn from the experience of others, are also remarkable for their apparent disinclination to do so.

>>> Human beings who are almost unique in having the ability to learn from the experience of others are also remarkable for their apparent disinclination to do so.
 8. Sam and I heard that the Internal Revenue Service wants to improve its image; they will no longer answer the phone with \'Next victim,\' and a new mascot, Timmy the Tax Collector, will replace the Grim Reaper.

>>> Correct!
 9. The only difference between me and a madman is that I am not mad.

>>> Correct!
 10. Those who make peaceful revolution impossible will make violent revolution inevitable

>>> Correct!

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