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2017-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I always have three meals a day I think it's very important to my health I don't drink alcohol and eat fastfood I frequently laugh and meet friends that connect with With advancing years I feel a preciousness of friends than before Thanks Bye~~~~~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for this homework. Please take note of my corrections, especially the proper use of punctuation marks after a sentence.

Enjoy the rest of your day!^^

~Kelly^^

I always have three meals a day

>> I always have three meals a day.
 I think it\'s very important to my health

>> I think it\'s very important to my health.
I don\'t drink alcohol and eat fastfood 

>> I don\'t drink alcohol and eat fast food. 
I frequently laugh and meet friends that connect with

>> I frequently laugh and meet friends that I keep in contact with.
With advancing years I feel a preciousness of friends than before

>> As the years go by, I feel that my friends are precious.
Thanks 

>> Thanks!
 Bye~~~~~

>> Correct.

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