Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for this homework. Please take note of my corrections, especially the proper use of punctuation marks after a sentence.
Enjoy the rest of your day!^^
~Kelly^^
I always have three meals a day
>> I always have three meals a day.
I think it\'s very important to my health
>> I think it\'s very important to my health.
I don\'t drink alcohol and eat fastfood
>> I don\'t drink alcohol and eat fast food.
I frequently laugh and meet friends that connect with
>> I frequently laugh and meet friends that I keep in contact with.
With advancing years I feel a preciousness of friends than before
>> As the years go by, I feel that my friends are precious.
Thanks
>> Thanks!
Bye~~~~~
>> Correct.
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