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2017-11-10 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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10/23 Oh my godness!! This is so hard..ㅜㅜ I can't do it...I am sorry...Please help me. 1. the/is/music/thing/the/about/love/film/I/that/the The film that I love is the thing about the music. 2. order/it/realize/is/word/the/important/to/correct 3. we/have/about/it/must/it/before/forgotten/seen/and 4.ordinary/accidents/year/items/by/every/of/are/thousands/ caused Ordinary accidents are caused by thousands of items every year. 5.building/woman/furry/a/from/a/was/dog/burning/her/by/rescued A woman was rescued by her furry dog from a burning building. 6. animals/business/it/to/after/an/exotic/look/is/expensive 7.nervous/students/taking/very/time/an/test/a/for/be/English/can

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday MISS [이름]!

I still want to commend your effort.

Thanks for trying. Kindly go over the sentences below.

Happy weekend!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


10/23 Oh my godness!!

>>> Oh my goodness!!

This is so hard..ㅜㅜ
I can\'t do it...I am sorry...Please help me.
1. the/is/music/thing/the/about/love/film/I/that/the
The film that I love is the thing about the music.
>>> The thing that I love about the film is the music.
2. order/it/realize/is/word/the/important/to/correct
>>> It is important to realize the correct word order.
3. we/have/about/it/must/it/before/forgotten/seen/and
>>> We must have seen it before and forgotten about it.
4.ordinary/accidents/year/items/by/every/of/are/thousands/
caused
Ordinary accidents are caused by thousands of items every year.

>>> Every year, thousands of accidents are caused by ordinary items.
 5.building/woman/furry/a/from/a/was/dog/burning/her/by/rescued
A woman was rescued by her furry dog from a burning building.

>>> A woman was rescued from a burning building by her furry dog.
 6. animals/business/it/to/after/an/exotic/look/is/expensive
>>> It is an expensive business to look after exotic animals.
7.nervous/students/taking/very/time/an/test/a/for/be/English/can

>>> Taking an English test can be a very nervous time for students. 

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