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I agree with you Miss [이름].
The way they do advertisements nowadays is different from before.
Anyway, let\'s talk about ads on Monday. See you!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
10/25 Write about the most shocking advertisement you have seen.
I don\'t remember the exact shocking advertisement sceen but
I was shocked how the advertisement has changed.
>>> I don\'t remember any shocking advertisement but I was shocked how advertisements have changed.
When I was young, I couldn\'t see the kiss sceen on advertisement.
>>> When I was young, I couldn\'t see kiss scenes on advertisements.
It is getting too much so I sometimes feel uncomfortable to watch TV with
children.
>>> Correct!
children cannot understand them but sometimes they ask me about the deep meaning of advertisement.
>>> Children cannot understand them but sometimes they ask me about the deep meaning of advertisements.
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