homework

Hi [이름]!

Great job for today. You expressed yourself well and you shared a lot of insights about birthday parties. Keep it up!

~t. Kelly^^

Describe the best party that you have been to. Why was it the best? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences.
My favorite party is birthday party.

>> Correct.
I can join my birthday party with my family or friends.

>> My family and friends can attend my birthday party.
I can eat many foods and I can get birthday presents.

>> I can eat many foods and get birthday presents.
Also,I can play game or play outside with my friends.

>> Also, I can play a game alone or play outside with my friends.
 nd,I like to go to my friend birthday party.

>> And, I like to go to my friend\'s birthday party.
Although, I troublesome to buy a present,but I can feel proud of myself because I give a present for him.

>> Although I have trouble buying a present, I feel proud of myself because I give him a gift.
I can play with my friends and eat foods.

>> Correct.
So, my favorite party is birthday party.

>> Correct.