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2017-11-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I think my special place is 'Deoksugung'to me. I frequently went to this because my best friend likes here. She has lived in Japan since married. We met 5 years ago. I miss her everday. Thanks Bye~~~~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your favorite place. Anyway, you are such a sweet friend. I hope you spend time more often even if you live far apart.

Happy weekend!

~Kelly^^

I think my special place is \'Deoksugung\'to me.

>> For me, my special place is \'Deoksugung\'.
I frequently went to this because my best friend likes here.

>> I frequently go to this place because my friend likes this place.
She has lived in Japan since married.

>> She started living in japan after she got married.
We met 5 years ago.

>> Correct.
I miss her everday.

>> I miss her every day.
 Thanks

>> Correct.
Bye~~~~

>> Correct.

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