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10/27 If you could join a variety show in your country, what would it be and why?
I want to join a trip show. There is a show which we experience package trips. I can make money and also I can look around the world. That is awsome!
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If I could join a show, I would like to join 2 Days 1 Night.
That show seems to be very interesting.
Well, thanks again. See you tomorrow Miss [이름]!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
10/27 If you could join a variety show in your country, what would it be and why?
I want to join a trip show.
>>> Correct!
>>> OR: I want to join a travel and adventure show.
There is a show which we experience package trips.
>>> There is a show where we experience package trips.
I can make money and also I can look around the world.
>>> Correct!
That is awsome!
>>> Correct!
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