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2017-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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10/30 What are the major concerns in your country nowadays? Nowadays, there are many teenagers' accident of violence. The big problem is that they don't know how bad things they did to others. It seems there's no morals any more. Many teenagers follow bad be haviors and it is getting serious. Hi~*^^* Have a nice weekend! I am sorry to put off the class! I hope we can have the class on Monday. Im already missing your class. Thanks!!

강사 첨삭

Hi there again MISS [이름]!

I am so sorry I checked this homework late.

Anyway, thanks a lot for writing this. Finally, we were able to talk to each other after three days.

See you again tomorrow.

~Teacher Shanee^^,

10/30 What are the major concerns in your country nowadays?

Nowadays, there are many teenagers\' accident of violence.

>>> Nowadays, there are many teenage violence cases.

The big problem
is that they don\'t know how bad things they did to others.

>>> The big problem is that the don\'t know how bad the things they did to others.

It seems there\'s no morals any more.

>>> Correct!

Many teenagers follow bad be haviors and it is getting serious.

>>> Many teenagers show bad behaviors and this problem is getting serious.

Hi~*^^* Have a nice weekend!
I am sorry to put off the class!
I hope we can have the class on Monday.
Im already missing your class.
Thanks!!

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