homework

2017-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

학생이 쓴 원문

I want to be a baobab tree. Baobabtree is very big and live for a lot of years. When I am a baobabtree, I can be many anymals havitat, and reach to many clouds.

강사 첨삭


Hi Kid! How\'s your day?

Your answers are impressive, as always.

I made a few corrections and suggestions for your reference.

Please don\'t forget to check. If you have any questions, please ask me during our class tonight.

Have lovely day!

Amanda:)


HOMEWORK 1

 I think robots are clever scarecrow.
>> I think robots are clever scarecrows.

 Scarecrow cannot do anything after harvest.
>> A scarecrow is not useful after harvest.
>> OR: Scarecrows are no longer useful after harvest.


 And it is dicarded from farmer.
>> It is discarded by farmers after harvest.
>> OR: Farmers discards them after harvest.


 Robots cannot do anything without human.

>> Correct


 When new robots are launched, peaple will discard an old robot too.

>>  When new robots are launched, people will discard old robots,  too.


 Robot just can do more things than a scarecrow do. 

>>A Robot just can do more things than a scarecrow. 

>> OR: Robots can do more things compared with scarecrows.  


HOMEWORK 2

I want to be a Baobab tree.

>> Correct

>> OR: If I could be a plant, I would be a Baobab tree.


Baobab tree is very big and live for a lot of years.

>> The baobab tree is very big and it can live for a lot of years.

>> OR: The baobab tree is very big and it can live for many years.

>> OR: The baobab tree is very big and it can live for a long time.


 When I am a baobabtree, I can be many anymals havitat, and reach to many clouds.

>> If I am a Baobab tree, I can be many animal\'s habitat. I can also reach the clouds.

>>OR: If I am a Baobab tree, I can be a habitat for many animals.

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