homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Kid! How\'s your day?
Your answers are impressive, as always.
I made a few corrections and suggestions for your reference.
Please don\'t forget to check. If you have any questions, please ask me during our class tonight.
Have lovely day!
Amanda:)
HOMEWORK 1
I think robots are clever scarecrow.
>> I think robots are clever scarecrows.
Scarecrow cannot do anything after harvest.
>> A scarecrow is not useful after harvest.
>> OR: Scarecrows are no longer useful after harvest.
And it is dicarded from farmer.
>> It is discarded by farmers after harvest.
>> OR: Farmers discards them after harvest.
Robots cannot do anything without human.
>> Correct
When new robots are launched, peaple will discard an old robot too.
>> When new robots are launched, people will discard old robots, too.
Robot just can do more things than a scarecrow do.
>>A Robot just can do more things than a scarecrow.
>> OR: Robots can do more things compared with scarecrows.
HOMEWORK 2
I want to be a Baobab tree.
>> Correct
>> OR: If I could be a plant, I would be a Baobab tree.
Baobab tree is very big and live for a lot of years.
>> The baobab tree is very big and it can live for a lot of years.
>> OR: The baobab tree is very big and it can live for many years.
>> OR: The baobab tree is very big and it can live for a long time.
When I am a baobabtree, I can be many anymals havitat, and reach to many clouds.
>> If I am a Baobab tree, I can be many animal\'s habitat. I can also reach the clouds.
>>OR: If I am a Baobab tree, I can be a habitat for many animals.
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