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2017-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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11/1 What do you think is the most dangerous sport? Why? Every sports have posibilities to be hurt so they are all dangerous. Among them, if I choose the most dangerous sport, It would be Boxing. It is so cruel and it doesn't seem to be sport anymore for me. Boxers hit other boxer to be down. I can see lots of blood and hurting players. I watched the news which one boxer died while he was having a game. That is why I dno't want to watch boxing games.

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I also don\'t like boxing.

When I was in high school, I met my classmate\'s uncles who used to be boxers.

Both of them became blind due to boxing. They\'re pitiful because the cannot really enjoy their lives anymore. They shared their experiences about boxing and it\'s funny because despite their condition, they still said they never regret their decision to be boxers.

Anyway, thanks for sharing your opinion.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


11/1 What do you think is the most dangerous sport? Why?

Every sports have posibilities to be hurt so they are all dangerous.

>>> Every sport can be dangerous.
 Among them, if I choose the most dangerous sport, It would be Boxing.

>>> Correct!
 It is so cruel and it doesn\'t seem to be sport anymore for me.

>>> It is so cruel and it doesn\'t seem to be a sport anymore for me.
Boxers hit other boxer to be down.

>>> Boxers hit each other to determines who is left standing.

I can see lots of blood and hurting
players.

>>> Correct!

I watched the news which one boxer died while he was having a
game.

>>> I watched the news about a boxer who died while having a fight.

That is why I dno\'t want to watch boxing games.

>>> Correct! [don\'t]

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