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2017-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Write about a special place to you. Include the reason/s why it's special. Answer in FIVE (5) sentences. My special place is Ever Land. As soon as I get there,I get exciting and interesting. I can see lot of animals and ride playmachine many times. It is lot of fun to go to Ever Land with my friends. So,I like this place.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your favorite place to visit. Enjoy more fun and exciting activities at Ever Land.^^

~t. Kelly^^

Write about a special place to you. Include the reason/s why it\'s special. Answer in FIVE (5) sentences.
My special place is Ever Land.

>> Correct.
As soon as I get there,I get exciting and interesting.

>> As soon as I get there, I get excited and interested.
I can see lot of animals and ride playmachine many times.

>> I can see lot of animals and ride the play machine many times.
It is lot of fun to go to Ever Land with my friends.

>> It is very fun to go to Ever Land with my friends.
So,I like this place.

>> That\'s why I like this place.

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