homework

2017-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

1. They are reducing bus and train fares so as to encourage more people to use public transport. 2. Therefore we have got an hour until the plane leaves, let's go for a coffee. 3. Even though Pamela is still at school she's already a bestselling novelist. 4. You can use my laptop computer, provided you promise to take very good care of it. 5. Mrs. [Name] wants to go snorkeling in Florida this summer, whereas Mr. [Name] wants to go and play golf in Scotland.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ella!

Thanks for your composition! You did a great job in answering your homework. Keep it up!

T. JanE ^^

1. They are reducing bus and train fares so as to encourage more people to use public transport.
>> Correct
2. Therefore we have got an hour until the plane leaves, let\'s go for a coffee.
>> SINCE we have got an hour until the plane leaves, let\'s go for a coffee.
3. Even though Pamela is still at school she\'s already a bestselling novelist.
>> Correct
4. You can use my laptop computer, provided you promise to take very good care of it.
>> Correct
5. Mrs. [Name] wants to go snorkeling in Florida this summer, whereas Mr. [Name] wants to go and play golf in Scotland.

>> Correct

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