Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you for sharing this experience to me.
It\'s a good thing you were able to overcome it. C\")
~Teacher Shanee^^,
11/6 Tell me about your greatest challenge you were up against and how you overcame it.
I had worked as a kindergarten teacher for 10years.
>>> Correct! [ten years / 10 years]
I was there after
graduation.
>>> Correct!
Fortunatly, I was popular in there so I could work there for
a long time but I was wondering that I am a real good teacher.
>>> Fortunately, I was popular there so I could work in that school for a long time. But I was wondering whether I was really a good teacher.
My school was so small.
>>> Correct!
I wanted to work better school however I didn\'t have any confidence.
>>> I wanted to work in a better school however, I didn\'t have any confidence.
Several times, I gave up moving to another school because I was so afraid that I could be a good teacher there.
>>> Correct!
Finally, I got a chance to move to another school and I successfully tested myself well.
>>> Correct!
It was the greatest challenge for me.
>>> Correct!
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