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2017-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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11/6 Tell me about your greatest challenge you were up against and how you overcame it. I had worked as a kindergarten teacher for 10years. I was there after graduation. Fortunatly, I was popular in there so I could work there for a long time but I was wondering that I am a real good teacher. My school was so small. I wanted to work better school however I didn't have any confidence. Several times, I gave up moving to another school because I was so afraid that I could be a good teacher there. Finally, I got a chance to move to another school and I successfully tested myself well. It was the greatest challenge for me.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for sharing this experience to me.

It\'s a good thing you were able to overcome it. C\")

~Teacher Shanee^^,


11/6 Tell me about your greatest challenge you were up against and how you overcame it.

I had worked as a kindergarten teacher for 10years.

>>> Correct! [ten years / 10 years]

I was there after
graduation.

>>> Correct!

Fortunatly, I was popular in there so I could work there for
a long time but I was wondering that I am a real good teacher.

>>> Fortunately, I was popular there so I could work in that school for a long time. But I was wondering whether I was really a good teacher.
 My school was so small.

>>> Correct!

I wanted to work better school however I didn\'t have any confidence.

>>> I wanted to work in a better school however, I didn\'t have any confidence.

Several times, I gave up moving to another school because I was so afraid that I could be a good teacher there.

>>> Correct!
 Finally, I got a chance to move to another school and I successfully tested myself well.

>>> Correct!

It was the greatest challenge for me.

>>> Correct!

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