Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for sending this in. I hope you could visit the Blue mountain next time. kkk Anyway, you are lucky because your chef trained you to become a better person and employee. Keep up the good work!^^
~Kelly^^
Hello ~ . how was your weekend??
>> Hello! How was your weekend?
I was going to go to blue mountain which is colored blue with my girlfriend but we woke up too late so we couldn`t go there .....
>> I was supposed to go to the Blue mountain with my girlfriend, but we woke up too late so we couldn\'t go there.
we thought we can go even though it`s late So i confirmed the time of cable car and transportation .
>> We thought we could go there though it\'s late, so I confirmed the cable cars and transportation operation hours.
However unfortunately , all the cable cars are closed already.
>> However, all the cable cars are closed already.
There was some of transportation but it`s too late and we didn`t wanna go there
>> There were some transportation available but it was too late already, so we didn\'t go there.
So we decided to go there next week and we were chilling out at home
>> So, we decided to go there next week, and we just chilled out at home.
Writing task: Write about a special place to you. Include the reason/s why it\'s special. Answer in FIVE (5) sentences.
My special place is at work i`m working on cuz the job means a great deal to me.
>> My special is at workplace because my job means a lot to me.
i got this job as applying 60resumes i`m never gonna forget this job forever .
>> I got this job after I submitted 60 resumes in different companies. I will never forget this job forever.
as working here , i learned so many unique skills from my chefs.
>> While working here, I learned so many unique skills from my chefs.
If i go back to my own country , on the other hand i`m really worried that i can meet good people like my chef who inspired me .
>> If I go back to my country, I\'m afraid I won\'t be able to meet a good and inspiring person like my chef.
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