Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I know that your passion is reading books.
You are a bookworm. ^^
I hope that you will be able to build libraries in the future.
That will be useful.
Have a good night!
_Teacher Dianne
Do you like going to libraries? Why?
>> correct
I like going to libraries. Because I like reading books.
>> I like going to libraries because I like reading books.
When I worked at the office I used to go library after work.
>> When I worked at the office before, I used to go to the library after work.
Library is eight floor at the building. I could read books there for free and borrow maximum five books.
>> The library is on the 8th floor. I could read books there for free and I can borrow a maximum of 5 books.
I want to get ideas and wisdom though books. How many books I read is not importnat. Most important thing is thinking about what I get through it.
>> I want to get ideas and wisdom through books. It\'s not important how many books I read. The most important thing is thinking about what I get through it.
After I read books, I try to use the knowledge in my life.
>> correct
My dream is making libraries for children.
>> correct
>> or: My dream is to build libraries for children.
As well children, also adults can use there.
>> Both children and adults can use the libraries or can read there.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.