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2017-11-14 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Do you like going to libraries? Why? I like going to libraries. Because I like reading books. When I worked at the office I used to go library after work. Library is eight floor at the building. I could read books there for free and borrow maximum five books. I want to get ideas and wisdom though books. How many books I read is not importnat. Most important thing is thinking about what I get through it. After I read books, I try to use the knowledge in my life. My dream is making libraries for children. As well children, also adults can use there.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


I know that your passion is reading books.

You are a bookworm. ^^

I hope that you will be able to build libraries in the future.

That will be useful.

Have a good night!


_Teacher Dianne


Do you like going to libraries? Why?

>> correct

 I like going to libraries. Because I like reading books.

>>  I like going to libraries because I like reading books.

When I worked at the office I used to go library after work.

>> When I worked at the office  before, I used to go to the library after work.

Library is eight floor at the building. I could read books there for free and borrow maximum five books.

>> The library is on the 8th floor. I could read books there for free and I can borrow a maximum of 5 books.

I want to get ideas and wisdom though books. How many books I read is not importnat. Most important thing is thinking about what I get through it.

>> I want to get ideas and wisdom through books. It\'s not important how many books I read. The most important thing is thinking about what I get through it.

After I read books, I try to use the knowledge in my life. 

>> correct
 My dream is making libraries for children.

>> correct

>> or:  My dream is to build libraries for children.

As well children, also adults can use there.

>> Both children and adults can use the libraries or can read there.

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