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2017-11-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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1. A gong ___ at 9:15 am to signal the beginning of a new work day at the New York Stock Market. is striking 2. A bear market is a prolonged period ___ falling prices. of 3. Investors ___ at the electronic billboard where bright green letters and numbers flow by on a black background. gaze 4. A bull market is characterized by ___ prices. rising 5. Only the initials of the companies and the price of their shares ___ on the billboard. are flashed It's pictures i took last Saturday. it's beuatiful autumn, T Jane!! ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ella!

Thanks for your composition today! Whoa! thanks for sharing the pictures as well! I really appreciate them. Have a good day!

T. JanE ^^

1. A gong ___ at 9:15 am to signal the beginning of a new work day at the New York Stock Market.
is striking
>> A gong _is struck_ at 9:15 am to signal the beginning of a new work day at the New York Stock Market.
2. A bear market is a prolonged period ___ falling prices.
of
>> Correct
3. Investors ___ at the electronic billboard where bright green letters and numbers flow by on a black background.
gaze
>> Correct
4. A bull market is characterized by ___ prices.
rising
>> Correct
5. Only the initials of the companies and the price of their shares ___ on the billboard.
are flashed
>> Correct
It\'s pictures i took last Saturday.

>> I took these pictures last Saturday.

it\'s beuatiful autumn, T Jane!! ^^

>> It\'s a beautiful autumn season, T. Jane!

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