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2017-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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What's your most valued possession? My most valuable thing posession is couple ring. when I got married, I bought couple ring. It has been for 5years. I had a experience that I lost two ring. so I try not to wear ring. but that is my momentous thing. so from now on, I will try to keep it.

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Hello [이름],
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T. Jeny



What\'s your most valued possession?
>>correct
My most valuable thing posession is couple ring.

>>My most valuable possession is my couple\'s ring.
 when I got married, I bought couple ring.

>>When I got married, I bought a couple\'s ring.

It has been for 5years.

>>correct
 I had a experience that I lost two ring. so I try not to wear ring.

>>I have tried losing the two rings, so I try not to wear the ring.
 but that is my momentous thing. so from now on, I will try to keep it.

>>But that is momentous to me so from that time, I try to keep it.

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