Homework

Hi [이름]!

I totally agree with your opinion. It is really important to choose the right TV programs we watch. Anyway, enjoy the rest of your day. See you!

~Kelly^^

Writing task: Many people believe that television violence has a negative effect on society because it promotes violence. Do you agree or disagree? Explain your answer in not more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I think that televison violence has a negative effect on society. 

>> I think that television violence has a negative effect on society. 

every time i turn on the TV , fight scenes always appear. 

>> Every time I turn on the TV, I always watch programs with many fight scenes. 

sometimes very very violent scenes appear 

>> Sometimes, there are violent scenes.
Because of TV , A lot has happened. 

>> As a result of watching of different violent programs on TV, a lot of things bad things happened.

for instance children do a unnaturally imitation of wrestling and use in their school . 

>> For instance, children imitated wrestlers\' moves on school playgrounds.

so was i anyway TV have pros and cons . 

>> So was I. Anyway, watching TV has pros and cons. 
I guess there are advantages on TV so if you put TV to good use, it can be benefit

>> I guess, watching TV has advantages. If you choose the right TV program to watch, it can be educational.