homework

2017-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Snow White is a [fairy tale] about a beautiful young girl who has to seek refuge in the [owls, dwarfs, werewolves] ' house because her stepmother wants to kill her. Her new friends warn her about the [ witch] but she doesn't recognize her in the form of this old woman who's setting a trap for her. 2. Let me introduce Casper , a little [ ghost] who has been living in a [horrible] house for one hundred years. He would like to become a little boy again and is waiting for the [goblin, dove, wizard to cast the [ magic moon] . 3. I wish I were a [fairy] who would wave her [ broomstick] over your head and turn you into a handsome Prince instead of this ugly [ frog], but it's a dream. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

You finished your homework quickly!

Thank you for being so responsible.

We will discuss the answers in class.

If you have questions, just ask the next time we talk.

I\'ll see you soon!

~~ Teacher Sharon

1. Snow White is a [fairy tale] about a beautiful young girl who has to seek refuge in the [owls, dwarfs, werewolves] \' house because her stepmother wants to kill her. Her new friends warn her about the [ witch] but she doesn\'t recognize her in the form of this old woman who\'s setting a trap for her.

>> dwarfs

2. Let me introduce Casper , a little [ ghost] who has been living in a [horrible] house for one hundred years. He would like to become a little boy again and is waiting for the [goblin, dove, wizard to cast the [ magic moon] .

>> haunted, wizard, magic spell

3. I wish I were a [fairy] who would wave her [ broomstick] over your head and turn you into a handsome Prince instead of this ugly [ frog], but it\'s a dream.

>> magic wand

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