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I ageee that some obstacles can be turned into benefits. Of course it would not suddenly be changed into other thing at once. However if people try to learn something from obstacles and overcome those obstacles, we could get some benefits from them. For example, if a student lives far from the school and has to spend more than an hour, that would be an obstacle to study. On the other hand, the student tries to manage time efficiently like reading simple materials in a subway. That kind of habit can also be helpful not only to study but also to do other things. It's not easy to turn an obstacle into benefit because confronting to obstacles is not easy. Not every obstacles can be changed into benefits but observing what we can learn something from obstacles would be good.
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for writing this nice essay.
I absolutely agree that we can learn something from every obstacle that we experience.
Obstacles are like blessings that are tightly wrapped inside a box.
You have to be keen and patient while waiting and looking at the gift inside.
That\'s my perspective about it. ^_^
I hope you\'re doing great.
See you again tomorrow. :)
~Teacher Charry
I ageee that some obstacles can be turned into benefits.
>> I agree that some obstacles can be turned into benefits.
Of course it would not suddenly be changed into other thing at once.
>> Of course it would not suddenly be changed into the other thing at once.
However if people try to learn something from obstacles and overcome those obstacles, we could get some benefits from them.
>> However, if people try to learn something from obstacles and overcome those obstacles, they could get some benefits from them.
For example, if a student lives far from the school and has to spend more than an hour, that would be an obstacle to study.
>> For example, if a student lives far from the school and has to spend more than an hour, that would be an obstacle to his studying.
On the other hand, the student tries to manage time efficiently like reading simple materials in a subway.
>> On the other hand, the student tries to manage time efficiently like reading simple materials on a subway.
That kind of habit can also be helpful not only to study but also to do other things.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> That kind of habit Is also helpful not only to studying but also in doing other things.
It\'s not easy to turn an obstacle into benefit because confronting to obstacles is not easy.
>> It\'s not easy to turn an obstacle into a benefit because confronting obstacles is not easy.
Not every obstacles can be changed into benefits but observing what we can learn something from obstacles would be good.
>> Not every obstacles can be changed into benefits but observing what we can learn from obstacles would be good.
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