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2017-11-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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what is the meaning of "give and take"? What does this mean to you? It means that If we want to be taken, we have to give. I think that giving is a big pleasure. when we give something to someone, we feel happiness and pleasure. so I dont' think that giving to take isnt' good thinking. in the bible, there is a saying "love your neigbor". and that is we give our everything without anticipating reward.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, [이름] !

I\'m glad that you are doing well in English. I commend you for your improvements.

I am more than happy to help you to become much more fluent! ^^

Please, check the corrections that I\'ve made so that you\'ll not commit the same mistake.

~T. Jeny



what is the meaning of \"give and take\"? What does this mean to you?
>>correct
It means that If we want to be taken, we have to give.

>>It means that if we want to receive, we have to give.
 I think that giving is a big pleasure. when we give something to someone, we feel happiness and pleasure.

>>I think, giving is a big pleasure.  When we give something to someone, we feel happy and  a sense of pleasure.

so I dont\' think that giving to take isnt\' good thinking.

>>So I don\'t think that \"give and take\" is a bad thing.

 in the bible, there is a saying \"love your neigbor\".

>>|In the bible, there is a saying \"love your neighbor.\"

and that is we give our everything without anticipating reward.

>>And that is when we give without anticipating for a reward.

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