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2017-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 May

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If you could change one thing about yourself, what would it be? Why? IF I could change one thing about myself, I'll change the my tall. Because, I'm short. so I often waer a high hill. but sometimes, high hill shoes is very uncomfortable and hurt my hill. I like sneakers than high hill shoes. It is more comfortable. but when I wear sneakers, I became short and small. So, if I have a chance to change something of mine, I'll change the my tall.

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday [이름]! Wow. I like your answer here!

We are exactly the same. I am also short and I am more comfortable

in wearing sneakers or flat shoes, but I look really short on it.

Sometimes, I wear high-heeled sandals especially on special occasions.

But you know what, there is an actress in the Philippines.

She is also short with a height of 154 cm. But she is now one of the most

famous actresses in the Philippines, most beautiful, sexiest, and a high-earner actress.

See? Height actually doesn\'t matter. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

IF I could change one thing about myself, I\'ll change the my tall.

>> If I could change one thing about myself, it will be my height.
 Because, I\'m short. so I often waer a high hill.

>> I am short so I often wear a high-heeled sandals.
 but sometimes, high hill shoes is very uncomfortable and hurt my hill.

>> But sometimes, high-heeled shoes are very uncomfortable and my feet are hurt.
 I like sneakers than high hill shoes.

>> I like sneakers than high-heeled shoes.
 It is more comfortable. but when I wear sneakers, I became short and small.

>> It is more comfortable to wear sneakers but I look shorter on it.
 So, if I have a chance to change something of mine, I\'ll change the my tall.

>> So, if I have a chance to change something about myself, it will be my height.

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